She the Night

[only rob]

As you know, I'm eminently unqualified to render substantive critique of such fine work. In this era of Dick and Jane prose, chopped up by silly line breaks, poetry that sings to be read again aloud, and yet again to gain missed nuance is rare enough to take one's breath away when encountered. This is such. I'm going to start recording some poems with flute, drums, etc. You can be sure that reading you again makes me braver yet to use rhyme, alliteration, unabashedly in this time of poetry devoid of device. I still want to write like you when I grow up, and I'm happy that Abu guided me here.

Rob