09-08-2011, 03:23 AM
It is always a relief to find something actually enjoyable, no matter that it may be a little wrapped in mystery. Primarily, I simply felt the sounds were good, meaning be blowed. That in turn is partly because you have already recorded your voice, and so, however inaccurately, I have an idea of how you might say it, with deliberate enunciation of the words, yet not so slowly that meter, where it matters, disappears.
In case anyone should not be familiar with Lohengrin and the Swan -- and what a sight to see on stage--- here is the Prelude to Act III :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InPRlxxOpOc
Todd is, as people dopily say, 'too good for his own good' as a critic, and I don't think I can add any useful insights-- but of course I can detract! You have a grammar problem which is handily unfixable, I think, as it should be 'Dorian and me'. I would not lose any sleep over it.
In case anyone should not be familiar with Lohengrin and the Swan -- and what a sight to see on stage--- here is the Prelude to Act III :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InPRlxxOpOc
Todd is, as people dopily say, 'too good for his own good' as a critic, and I don't think I can add any useful insights-- but of course I can detract! You have a grammar problem which is handily unfixable, I think, as it should be 'Dorian and me'. I would not lose any sleep over it.