09-07-2011, 03:28 PM
(09-07-2011, 10:56 AM)Heslopian Wrote: How about "mist" instead of "nymph"?I do like "mist" instead of nymph... it makes for a nice contrasting atmosphere next to the building fires line. Just my thought. Go with your gut on this one, Jack
I like your idea of ending on the "browning grass". I think I'll do that.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
