The Explorers
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(09-07-2011, 10:56 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  How about "mist" instead of "nymph"?
I like your idea of ending on the "browning grass". I think I'll do that.
I do like "mist" instead of nymph... it makes for a nice contrasting atmosphere next to the building fires line. Just my thought. Go with your gut on this one, Jack Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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The Explorers - by heslopian - 09-04-2011, 04:24 PM
RE: The Explorers - by billy - 09-06-2011, 01:49 PM
RE: The Explorers - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 10:48 PM
RE: The Explorers - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 07:04 AM
RE: The Explorers - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:40 PM
RE: The Explorers - by addy - 09-07-2011, 10:11 AM
RE: The Explorers - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 10:56 AM
RE: The Explorers - by addy - 09-07-2011, 03:28 PM



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