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The Explorers
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09-07-2011, 10:56 AM
Thanks for your feedback Addy
 How about "mist" instead of "nymph"? I like your idea of ending on the "browning grass". I think I'll do that.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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RE: The Explorers - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 10:48 PM
RE: The Explorers - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 07:04 AM
RE: The Explorers - by billy - 09-07-2011, 02:40 PM
RE: The Explorers - by addy - 09-07-2011, 10:11 AM
RE: The Explorers - by heslopian - 09-07-2011, 10:56 AM
RE: The Explorers - by addy - 09-07-2011, 03:28 PM
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