09-07-2011, 08:46 AM
(09-07-2011, 01:16 AM)AvariciousApathist Wrote: I'm coming from an odd perspective, but it reminds me of ICP's 'Fxxx the World' if you're not familiar with it then just forget what I said . . .No, I don't -- I may be very sleepy or ignorant, or both, but I don't know who ICP is either. Sounds a bit like the nasty ICF (InterCity Firm). Why, would I be shocked, being a fragile old grand-father?
Maybe a more advanced version of this?:
http://www.dpmms.cam.ac.uk/~tf/poem24.html
Anyway, glad it amused you.
(09-07-2011, 07:26 AM)Heslopian Wrote: An excellent poem, full of wonderful petite images wrapped up snugly in a flowing rhythm, and one of the best closing lines I've read for a very long time. It makes what precedes it almost profound. Thank you for the read, Abu.Thank you -- but steady on! I have been told that it works well for kids, presumably because 'poo' is included!