09-07-2011, 07:26 AM
An excellent poem, full of wonderful petite images wrapped up snugly in a flowing rhythm, and one of the best closing lines I've read for a very long time. It makes what precedes it almost profound. Thank you for the read, Abu.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

