09-07-2011, 01:16 AM
I'm coming from an odd perspective, but it reminds me of ICP's 'Fxxx the World' if you're not familiar with it then just forget what I said . . . Haha definitely made me laugh and kept me interested. I don't wanna belabor the point, but I agree about the last line. This poem needs a punch-line, imo. Nice work.