The Explorers

[billy]

is this in the style of o capitano my capitano?

the opening line is a very audacious statement.
i loved this line; hosting their own hillocks it's profound in the extreme when used in the context of the poem.
could cakes be singular i wonder?

i also thought;

mount you like a loyal steed,
fill you like an ale mug,
score the meadows with our love.

was exceptional. i'm trying to think of the two explorers that did the american thing this reminds me of but my mind fails.
thats it, lewis and clark though i'm not sure they had a lumberjack between them hehe.

i like the wordplay wit the title and the way it interacts with the poem.
not a bad write jack

thanks for the read.