08-11-2011, 02:51 PM
Billy, I'll look again at the em-dashes, I should be able to remove a couple if it's obvious that the italicised parts are a different speaker interrupting.
Sid, Todd, I'm sure you both realise that the entire poem's just an excuse for me to never remember anything line-for-line
But I've always believed that the words are really only there to remind you of what's going on in the background.
Sid, Todd, I'm sure you both realise that the entire poem's just an excuse for me to never remember anything line-for-line
But I've always believed that the words are really only there to remind you of what's going on in the background.
It could be worse