08-08-2011, 11:39 AM
I think "worshipper" has two "p"s. Other than that this is excellent. Song like. The last line is excellent, and the poem as a whole is darkly compelling. Thank you for the read Todd.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

