07-29-2011, 08:46 AM
Make up your mind, Jack, is it a blond-haired boy you want or that long dark knight? :p
Craving emptiness will hit home for many artists -- either silence, or a blank canvas to fill only with those things we choose ourselves, none of the background noise and clutter of the intrusive world. We create our own ideal existence, and then the ignorant come along and try to tell us what they think it really is. I love your inversion of the standard moon-as-beautiful-goddess image.
I think you need "replacing it" instead of "them", as you have "is drained". That's all I've got, I'm afraid.
Craving emptiness will hit home for many artists -- either silence, or a blank canvas to fill only with those things we choose ourselves, none of the background noise and clutter of the intrusive world. We create our own ideal existence, and then the ignorant come along and try to tell us what they think it really is. I love your inversion of the standard moon-as-beautiful-goddess image.
I think you need "replacing it" instead of "them", as you have "is drained". That's all I've got, I'm afraid.
It could be worse