07-28-2011, 05:02 PM
Jack,
I cannot add to the good feedback you already received but I had to say I really like what you have begun here.
Some very good writing. I especially like that last stanza.
Sid
I cannot add to the good feedback you already received but I had to say I really like what you have begun here.
Some very good writing. I especially like that last stanza.
Sid
