Poetry

Poetry

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07-28-2011, 07:09 AM

Ah okay then. I think will change the "my"s to "the"s in the second verse. Thanks again for the feedback, Leanne.

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Poetry - by heslopian - 07-28-2011, 12:33 AM

RE: Poetry - by Leanne - 07-28-2011, 05:22 AM

RE: Poetry - by heslopian - 07-28-2011, 05:59 AM

RE: Poetry - by Leanne - 07-28-2011, 06:34 AM

RE: Poetry - by heslopian - 07-28-2011, 07:09 AM

RE: Poetry - by addy - 07-28-2011, 10:15 AM

RE: Poetry - by ICSoria - 07-28-2011, 05:02 PM

RE: Poetry - by heslopian - 07-28-2011, 06:03 PM

RE: Poetry - by billy - 07-29-2011, 12:33 PM

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