07-26-2011, 02:40 PM
hi craig,
for me it needs to relate
to the reader. the last two lines succeed to a point
but the lines 1 through 4 need a bit of clarity.
thanks for the read
for me it needs to relate
to the reader. the last two lines succeed to a point
but the lines 1 through 4 need a bit of clarity.
thanks for the read