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07-25-2011, 10:08 AM

i just realized i said free verse instead of blank verse, i always get confused.
i now notice two line with 5 and a half feet which makes me think i was more correct the 1st time.

whatever you do, don't change it (i don't think it's wrong, just pointing out that i missed it the first 20 times i read it Sad

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Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by ICSoria - 07-22-2011, 03:19 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 03:53 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by addy - 07-22-2011, 08:55 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by billy - 07-22-2011, 10:42 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by ICSoria - 07-22-2011, 02:54 PM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by critical mass - 07-22-2011, 01:55 PM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by billy - 07-23-2011, 02:45 PM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by ICSoria - 07-25-2011, 05:30 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by Todd - 07-25-2011, 03:49 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by ICSoria - 07-25-2011, 05:38 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by billy - 07-25-2011, 05:37 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue - by billy - 07-25-2011, 10:08 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by ICSoria - 10-01-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by Aish - 10-02-2011, 06:06 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by ICSoria - 10-02-2011, 06:26 AM

RE: Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by billy - 10-03-2011, 04:25 PM

RE: Bisbee Blue (Latest Revisions) - by ICSoria - 10-04-2011, 09:46 PM

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