Asunder (Revised)

[billy]

(First revision)

Asunder flowers
of rosin bloom

Deceiving and tranquil
like pale faced moons.


*Original version was me trying to remember how I wrote it... as it was years ago.

*It is talking about a persons eyes.

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Asunder flowered
a rosen blue
deceiving and tranquil
like pale faced moons.

footnotes telling what the poems about don't really work for me,

the last two lines work but i struggle with the 1st two
sorry i can't be more helpful