07-23-2011, 02:45 PM
not that i know a lot of meter but it seems you're not doing too bad 
i struggle like hell with it at times.
the poem itself for me works well with the meter as is, i do have to ask if line 2 is iambic, i only ask so that i can fully understand.
it doesn't look like it needs changing, i'm just in need of knowing
i struggle like hell with it at times. the poem itself for me works well with the meter as is, i do have to ask if line 2 is iambic, i only ask so that i can fully understand.
it doesn't look like it needs changing, i'm just in need of knowing