07-23-2011, 10:45 AM
(07-23-2011, 07:19 AM)Aish Wrote: I do not like to see poems without comments, but I am afraid I do not follow you, ckeo.
Asunder as I understand it is an adjective or adverb and here you seem to be using it as a noun. In L2 'rosen blue' - I know there are blue roses, but a rosy blue makes no sense to me. I apologize for not being more helpful.
Sorry, I edited it... it is now closer to how I originally wrote it.
It has a special meaning to myself so the wording may not make much sense to others.
My name is Craig.
