A woman's Love Of Drink?
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I don't think you should feel all that yerky on this point because this particular word has only a slight difference in stress between the two syllables. In my mind, this is a positive thing as it adds a bit of modulation to what can easily become a tedious read, which Iambic is often prone to become. As a Petrarchan Sonnet, this works. I like the way you summed up your point in the sestet.


(07-14-2011, 03:38 PM)billy Wrote:  right. i scanned it as;
for HOUSE/BOUND WIVES/ i'm sorry i mentioned it cos now i look like a yerk. Blush

in that case i have to say i knew it was iambic all the way through Blush
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Messages In This Thread
A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-14-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by Leanne - 07-14-2011, 03:26 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-14-2011, 03:31 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by Leanne - 07-14-2011, 03:34 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-14-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 08:56 AM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by heslopian - 07-14-2011, 07:13 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-20-2011, 10:25 AM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by Aish - 07-24-2011, 06:07 AM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-25-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by heslopian - 07-25-2011, 08:24 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-26-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by critical mass - 07-26-2011, 11:57 PM
RE: A woman's Love Of Drink? - by billy - 07-27-2011, 05:51 AM



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