07-18-2011, 09:53 AM
at first i thought it was about the truth of the mirror showing age.
then i sensed it to be be more a rant at love or what it should have been. of course i'm wrong but that's coolio hehe.
the vill is word perfect so no comment on the form other than to say excellently done.
the content for me has an ambiguity that works on more than one level (it's something i like in poetry) i get my own story from the poem and think others would probably get their own poem. i can't actually explain what i'm trying to say but you know what i mean
thanks for the read
then i sensed it to be be more a rant at love or what it should have been. of course i'm wrong but that's coolio hehe.
the vill is word perfect so no comment on the form other than to say excellently done.
the content for me has an ambiguity that works on more than one level (it's something i like in poetry) i get my own story from the poem and think others would probably get their own poem. i can't actually explain what i'm trying to say but you know what i mean
thanks for the read