07-14-2011, 03:26 PM
On L6? Are you sure? It reads in lovely IP the whole way through to me -- though I'm still getting used to your rhyming of mud/good etc (don't change it though, it's wonderful, just funny 
).
I don't even bother with a veil of good, I fear...
I really like this, Billy, it's not just humorous, it's quite contemplative -- which is the best kind of humour, that which overlays a social commentary of some sort. And form-wise, it really is perfect.
).I don't even bother with a veil of good, I fear...
I really like this, Billy, it's not just humorous, it's quite contemplative -- which is the best kind of humour, that which overlays a social commentary of some sort. And form-wise, it really is perfect.
It could be worse