Billy Din!

[Leanne]

You can chew a bloomin' ear
as you chug down luke warm beer,
cos' you're wallets filled with money and you've got it;
but when you talk of writin'
you can spend the fuckin' night in,
cos' of edits till before you're sayin' fuck it.
In the pigpen with the swine
it's the place i serve me time,
by helping out the needy and the newb.
And damn, within that slew
the finest man i knew
was the temperamental leader Billy din.
He was "Din! Din! Din!
You pimpin' hump of snot-crust, Billy din!
Yo! knob-neck get here quick,
feedback, give it, make it slick!
You lazy-fucked up admin Billy Din.

It's beautiful, Billy, brings a tear to the eye

You've handled the meter really well so you've obviously been saying it before you commit it to the page, and you've used enough of the original text to make it a great parody (or the beginning of one). BUT... you've kind of screwed the rhyme scheme, which is one of the really important parts of the original. I can handle a near rhyme with got it/ fuck it, but the two lines I've highlighted really should rhyme to keep the sounds intact.

Damn fine start though.