"A dead man's monologue."

[addy]

Interesting idea, that with the state of death seeps out color and passion. I like what I'm seeing with it... at some points it could be tightened up but still good.

Why did you kill me?
Hostility?
Rejection? maybe you can take out these question marks and just leave the one after envy
Envy?
- Enough to commit murder? You don't need this line, imo
Didn't you know
Death isn't a silly,
Five minute long, quarrel?
It comes once and for all.
I forgive you, my brother, for it.
I have no regrets - I am dead.
Of course, you should know,
If I could I would kill you once more.
So pity,
Death comes once and for all. Nice close