06-24-2011, 10:02 AM
is any woman with child innocent 
just kidding hehe.
def yes to guilt subsided and to innocent, will do a quick edit in a while.
looking on your feedback proves to me that rushing poems isn't as clever a thing to do was we think.
the subside instead of 'had left' seems so obvious on a second take. thanks for the feedback as always .
just kidding hehe.def yes to guilt subsided and to innocent, will do a quick edit in a while.
looking on your feedback proves to me that rushing poems isn't as clever a thing to do was we think.
the subside instead of 'had left' seems so obvious on a second take. thanks for the feedback as always .