06-22-2011, 04:06 AM
I thought this praiseworthy if only for the reference to meeting the folks. Perhaps the sound and tone could have varied a little, to reflect 'real' against 'sexual' passages -- I mean the sound of the words and pace. But I am too quick to carp -- so, well done, it was worth reading, and funny. Sexuality is not really being discussed though -- more the sexual mood, but heaven knows how to change that -- it is a good enough shorthand.

