i love the way the 1st verse is en jambed
and then ...i as the reader want more.
for me the poem could be condensed into that 1st verse.
i'd like to see something definitive image wise to build on the first verse.
for me the poems simplicity isn't giving enough. jmo
thanks as always for the read jadie.
and then ...i as the reader want more.
for me the poem could be condensed into that 1st verse.
i'd like to see something definitive image wise to build on the first verse.
for me the poems simplicity isn't giving enough. jmo
thanks as always for the read jadie.