Drift

[billy]

I thought i could break it down a little to let you see what i was trying to say with it:

Lost


held by you

wrapped in grace

inhaling dew from perfumed exchange

exquisite aromas rising from between two



supple waves of spell binding titillation

given by your lips

only consummates my adoration



blossoming beneath untamed energy

i become a glittering ocean

slowly you drift

into me


Bliss

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Lost

held by you.
Sensual scents
present in the moment.

Teasing feelings,
excitement
brought by the kiss,
the anticipation of penetration.

A longed for entry;
wet untamed.
Make me drip.

Slowly
you drift
into me

bliss.

i know the above looks like i wrote it but the words are all yours, from your explanation.
i'm not trying to re write the poem but i am trying to show you that often a poem can be found in an explanation.

the writes you put in prose, within them you give the explanation and because of it they, specially the granddad one jumps out at us (me) jmo.