Drift

[violet]

Thank you all for your beautifully thoughtful critiques
I appreciate all of your suggestions and it is always good to hear other peoples P.O.V

I thought i could break it down a little to let you see what i was trying to say with it:

Lost


held by you

wrapped in grace

inhaling dew from perfumed exchange

exquisite aromas rising from between two (this and line above relates to the certain 'scents' that are present when in a 'sensual moment' ... keeping it clean by saying 'sensual moment' )




supple waves of spell binding titillation (teasing feelings of excitement brought about by the kiss. Anticipation of penetration)

given by your lips

only consummates my adoration (i agree,, consummates may be the wrong word)



blossoming beneath untamed energy (this is in relation to the longed for 'entry' and how the subject of the poem 'let's herself go' under the untamed/wild passions of the male)

i become a glittering ocean (us ladies do become rather 'wet'.. even more so during the act it's self )

slowly you drift

into me


Bliss


I hope this was helpful in explaining

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, i will take note and change a few lines/words here and there