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Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: )

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06-06-2011, 03:19 PM

tanks for the feedback
i'll see what can be done with the critic line, and edit the grammar and spelling now Wink

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Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by billy - 06-06-2011, 01:59 PM

RE: Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 02:41 PM

RE: Rember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by billy - 06-06-2011, 03:19 PM

RE: Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 03:31 PM

RE: Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by billy - 06-06-2011, 05:16 PM

RE: Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 06:28 PM

RE: Remember: (Attempt at a Villanelle: ) - by billy - 06-16-2011, 10:14 AM

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