05-24-2011, 06:08 PM
Thanks Jadielue
This is the edited version. Have posted it above in the first post also, alongside the original.
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
I fell from air into water
losing my breath in the rush
horror happens slowly
lungs gasp in reflex
for a while
Daedalus, the wings you made me
fan skeletal like fins
mocking us in their waves of embrace
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin
This is the edited version. Have posted it above in the first post also, alongside the original.
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
I fell from air into water
losing my breath in the rush
horror happens slowly
lungs gasp in reflex
for a while
Daedalus, the wings you made me
fan skeletal like fins
mocking us in their waves of embrace
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin

