Icarus

[mroning tide]

Hi Heslopian

Thanks for your feedback, that's really generous.

Re 'how many fathoms will I have to wait', I guess I was also thinking about 'how many fathoms will I have to weight', at what point would the weight of a body meet the depth of water where it could be held.

I agree that hope-lung doesn't work. I was thinking about those initial moments just after something terrible has happened when you don't realise how bad it is and there can be a reaction to try and minimize the event. But no matter what you do, the realisation creeps over you. Need to find a way to condense that into an image.

Thanks again

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Hi Billy

I'll definitely be posting more. This forum is great. I've been wondering for a while what to do with the things I write and wondering how to get feedback. So pleased I came across this forum.