05-24-2011, 08:55 AM
Hi Todd, Hi Billy
Thanks so much for your feedback, that's really helpful and generous. This is the first time I've shared any of my writing.
I'm going to have a think about your feedback, rework it and post again.
Thank you.
Thanks so much for your feedback, that's really helpful and generous. This is the first time I've shared any of my writing.
I'm going to have a think about your feedback, rework it and post again.
Thank you.

