05-24-2011, 12:36 AM
EDIT 1
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
I fell from air into water
losing my breath in the rush
horror happens slowly
lungs gasp in reflex
for a while
Daedalus, the wings you made me
fan skeletal like fins
mocking us in their waves of embrace
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin
ORIGINAL
I fell from a great height
from air into water
plummeting
losing my breath in the rushing air
smashed into a neglectful cradling slow fall
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
horror happens slowly
the hope-lung gasps in reflex
for a while
you fell first
and I followed
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
I fell from air into water
losing my breath in the rush
horror happens slowly
lungs gasp in reflex
for a while
Daedalus, the wings you made me
fan skeletal like fins
mocking us in their waves of embrace
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin
ORIGINAL
I fell from a great height
from air into water
plummeting
losing my breath in the rushing air
smashed into a neglectful cradling slow fall
horror is not sudden
it happens slowly
how many fathoms will I have to wait
until the water will hold my body?
horror happens slowly
the hope-lung gasps in reflex
for a while
you fell first
and I followed
horror happens slowly
a blossoming bruise
budding under skin

