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In Another Universe
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05-04-2011, 11:10 AM
This was a great read. It painted a rich and fascinating emotional picture... it was interesting that though in this piece the narrator was declaring his love, there was still a patronising quality to his declaration, giving the ache of their distance more internal complexity than simply being "star-crossed".
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 07:18 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by Ris Yerg - 05-03-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 07:26 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by ficosdarkness - 05-04-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by billy - 05-04-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-04-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by addy - 05-04-2011, 11:10 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by billy - 05-05-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-05-2011, 12:12 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by kath3 - 05-06-2011, 02:40 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by addy - 05-08-2011, 01:13 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-08-2011, 01:27 PM
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