At The Deathbed
#4
Heslopian,
Thank you for picking up on the repetitiveness of the last line. I have been trying it different ways. Your feedback was important.
...and thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm new here and will do my best to return the favor.

blue skies,
pete
Hi Billy,
Looking forward to hearing more from you.
pete
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Messages In This Thread
At The Deathbed - by peter6 - 04-17-2011, 11:23 PM
RE: At The Deathbed - by heslopian - 04-18-2011, 01:27 AM
RE: At The Deathbed - by billy - 04-18-2011, 06:03 AM
RE: At The Deathbed - by peter6 - 04-18-2011, 07:34 AM
RE: At The Deathbed - by billy - 04-18-2011, 08:49 AM
RE: At The Deathbed - by peter6 - 04-18-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: At The Deathbed - by addy - 04-18-2011, 11:18 AM



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