03-23-2011, 10:14 PM
Thanks for the feedback Billy. I called it "Death" in order to reflect the mundane reality I was trying to convey. I think I may have gone a little far
I think this is one of those poems where the attempt at the artfully humdrum just comes across as humdrum.
I think this is one of those poems where the attempt at the artfully humdrum just comes across as humdrum.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe