Bipolar
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Thanks for the kind words and feedback Billy. I'll change "bray" to "laugh" once I've finished this. Like I said to Addy I agree regarding the brain line. I think I remember the original line: "The brain spinning like candy floss". Would that work better?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Bipolar - by heslopian - 03-17-2011, 08:21 PM
RE: Bipolar - by addy - 03-23-2011, 08:01 AM
RE: Bipolar - by heslopian - 03-23-2011, 04:41 PM
RE: Bipolar - by addy - 03-23-2011, 06:49 PM
RE: Bipolar - by billy - 03-23-2011, 08:29 PM
RE: Bipolar - by heslopian - 03-23-2011, 08:42 PM
RE: Bipolar - by billy - 03-23-2011, 09:35 PM
RE: Bipolar - by heslopian - 03-23-2011, 10:15 PM



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