03-23-2011, 08:42 PM
Thanks for the kind words and feedback Billy. I'll change "bray" to "laugh" once I've finished this. Like I said to Addy I agree regarding the brain line. I think I remember the original line: "The brain spinning like candy floss". Would that work better?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

