its narrative/observational. a stroy in poetical form.
there show which = imagery/shown with an image.
and tell/telly which = being told something
nothing wrong with either as long as it's a good tell which includes some images, this does.
a bad tell would be along the lines of;
i cut the vein and saw the blood exit my veins.
i couldn't take it any moe
i'm really depressed because my boyfriend left me
and my cat died
i have to end it all and no i have
though i still managed to write the above poem because this really isn't a dead person typing.
and i've found a new boyfriend who likes twosomes.
there show which = imagery/shown with an image.
and tell/telly which = being told something
nothing wrong with either as long as it's a good tell which includes some images, this does.
a bad tell would be along the lines of;
i cut the vein and saw the blood exit my veins.
i couldn't take it any moe
i'm really depressed because my boyfriend left me
and my cat died
i have to end it all and no i have
though i still managed to write the above poem because this really isn't a dead person typing.
and i've found a new boyfriend who likes twosomes.