03-22-2011, 05:04 PM
i like this though i hate the 'thus'
i like the dowager simile, it made me smile.
i know of the puke stains. and at first i thought thats what the poem was about but as i read
it came across as someone spring cleaning their life.
a good write jack
i like the dowager simile, it made me smile.
i know of the puke stains. and at first i thought thats what the poem was about but as i read
it came across as someone spring cleaning their life.
a good write jack