simply excellent. i've a feeling i've read this already yet i'm sure i haven't.
the images and power of the piece are vibrant
i love the reference to wordsworth or knowing you and how you liked herrick maybe him (depending when you wrote the poem)
if it were in serious i might be able to pick a nit or two but here i really am just enjoying the word skill, the images the allusions etc
this is one i will come back to again and again. worthy of being published. this i think is one of the best poems i've read. thanks jack
the images and power of the piece are vibrant
i love the reference to wordsworth or knowing you and how you liked herrick maybe him (depending when you wrote the poem)
if it were in serious i might be able to pick a nit or two but here i really am just enjoying the word skill, the images the allusions etc
this is one i will come back to again and again. worthy of being published. this i think is one of the best poems i've read. thanks jack