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I am enamoured of the cesspool of humanity.

Harry Harlow and his rhesus monkeys
huddled inside their "pits of despair",
shivering on the "rape rack",
locked in wire cages like Jewish children
at the hands of Doctor Mengele.
But whereas the latter is now a monster,
Harlow and his research are "controversial".

Sylvia Plath praising her daddy's bones,
sealing herself inside his coffin
through the embrace of another man,
his ribs against hers, hand to hand
and crotch to crotch like teenagers
on the backseat. The rhythms of procreation designed
to imitate a coupling
that would still a libertine's heartbeat.

Anne Sexton probing her precious cunny
while baby sleeps on her shoulder,
the memories of youth drowning the poet
as inheritance rings the doorbell,
breathes against her spine, her skull,
bats in the attic forging their escape.

Chairs embedded with nails, chin rests
and head clamps which pop out the eyes,
denigrate lucidity like a statue crumbling
until the victim is barely conscious,
or at least enough to know the sky's blue,
that grass is green and people die.

I know, I know, I'm being morbid.
Cheer up, find a man, write about daffodils...

The green leather book my grandfather left
still sits on my shelf, barely molested,
the spine unburdened, a relieved mule,
the nature verse he so adored
reduced to a strand of tinsel.

Perhaps when I reach seventy-five
I'll lean back and study a vibrant greenhouse,
a lone cigar in my pocket,
my feet resting on a wood paneled porch,
as dinner is made and the sound of humming
emanates from the kitchen.

But as it is now I must trek through the dark,
a sentence in search of a full stop.
simply excellent. i've a feeling i've read this already yet i'm sure i haven't.
the images and power of the piece are vibrant
i love the reference to wordsworth or knowing you and how you liked herrick maybe him (depending when you wrote the poem)

if it were in serious i might be able to pick a nit or two but here i really am just enjoying the word skill, the images the allusions etc
this is one i will come back to again and again. worthy of being published. this i think is one of the best poems i've read. thanks jack
Thanks Billy!Smile You've put a spring in my step for the day and we didn't even have to make loveHysterical I was referring to Wordsworth with those daffodils, as the green leather book I mentioned is all his work, but I guess it could be about Herrick too.
P.S: I decided to put some of my poems in "Mild" so you didn't have to give a serious critique for three hundred new entriesSmile
thanksjack, i'm scared to look there. here i zip through a bit quicker hehe. i did read this a good few times though.
By the way the feeling of deja vu you have is probably from having read my older poems. This is sort of a return to my older, more personal style.
i like it, will have a look in the serious crit later hehe.