you could use different words;
Work and write and die happiness.
Maybe achieve that real bitter quality. Specially change bitterness because it's already been used twice in L3, and 4.
Earn the right to be world weary.
A few will never escape the sadness.
Work and write and die happiness.
Maybe achieve that real bitter quality. Specially change bitterness because it's already been used twice in L3, and 4.
Earn the right to be world weary.
A few will never escape the sadness.