02-24-2011, 04:25 PM
only do that if you think it warrants it, not because i might be obscured hehe.
i just got the feeling in the poem that the 1st person was interested in topping himself
and then he wasn't or vice verse. i wasn't sure. sorry if i'm not being lucid jack.
and don't get me wrong the poem in itself is a really good one. i'm or i just wasn't sure how i should read the 1st person's POV.
i just got the feeling in the poem that the 1st person was interested in topping himself
and then he wasn't or vice verse. i wasn't sure. sorry if i'm not being lucid jack.
and don't get me wrong the poem in itself is a really good one. i'm or i just wasn't sure how i should read the 1st person's POV.
