maybe death has no meaning
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only do that if you think it warrants it, not because i might be obscured hehe.

i just got the feeling in the poem that the 1st person was interested in topping himself
and then he wasn't or vice verse. i wasn't sure. sorry if i'm not being lucid jack.
and don't get me wrong the poem in itself is a really good one. i'm or i just wasn't sure how i should read the 1st person's POV.
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maybe death has no meaning - by heslopian - 02-24-2011, 06:33 AM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by billy - 02-24-2011, 10:29 AM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by heslopian - 02-24-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by billy - 02-24-2011, 11:04 AM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by heslopian - 02-24-2011, 12:32 PM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by billy - 02-24-2011, 04:25 PM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by heslopian - 02-24-2011, 07:25 PM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by billy - 02-25-2011, 05:24 AM
RE: maybe death has no meaning - by heslopian - 02-25-2011, 07:56 AM



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