01-11-2011, 10:43 PM
I feel like it's missing something too. Not sure what that is though. I churned this one out early today, just before taking my siblings to school; I was so excited to be writing again following my dry period that I didn't give it too much thought after the fact. Though I re-wrote the second verse a couple of times. Thank you as always for the kind words and feedback
EDIT: Changed "before" to "behind."
EDIT: Changed "before" to "behind."
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe