An ABC
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(01-10-2011, 06:26 PM)Heslopian Wrote:  A disarray of paperbacks.
Bunk beds piled with debris.
Carpet scattered like the steps
Down which new brides descend.
I reside in this narrow landscape.
have you been studying .

it seems you need to clean the room.
a good example of the form. nicely done jack.
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An ABC - by heslopian - 01-10-2011, 06:26 PM
RE: An ABC - by billy - 01-11-2011, 12:14 PM
RE: An ABC - by heslopian - 01-11-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: An ABC - by billy - 01-13-2011, 01:20 PM
RE: An ABC - by Ris Yerg - 02-01-2011, 03:52 PM



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