Love (A Cinquain)

[heslopian]

Love
Cherished psychotic confusion
He slashes his wrists with a fountain pen
Trying to become an artist
Purposeless

[billy]

love the third line.
nicely done.

i'll be popping off to write a couple myself in a few mins.

thanks for the read jack

[addy]

Agree about the third line. The connection here between love and art and pain is so much truth packed in few words. Thanks for this

[Ris Yerg]

Very witty!
R.Y.

[heslopian]

Thanks Ris Yerg