(content warning) Poem

[billy]

Thanks for the heads up on the spelling mistake, and I will remove the "rhythm" and "poet or shit" lines. I think they're a bit too blunt. Is that why you singled them out?
Thanks again for the feedback and kind words

for me they feel trite (if that's the right word) again for me they hinder what i perceive as a good poem and lessen it's strength.