His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously)
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i like the last one. i think the difference between ud is this, you tend to write poetry i tend to write funny stories hehe.

i really think you could have a series, you have a good thing going on here.
his ass hole in prison series
his hopes and aspirations upon release series

were as buoyant
as whale shit

his mouth as a young man series.

was the newyork sewer
after the rains

it's effin endless.




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RE: His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously) - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 08:44 AM
RE: His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously) - by billy - 12-10-2010, 12:27 PM



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