His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously)
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(12-10-2010, 09:24 AM)Todd Wrote:  Thanks Lawrence. I'm going to treat this like Carly Simon (You're So Vain). I would identify the asshole in question until I auction the information off later for a hundred thousand dollars (or Euros if the dollar continues to tank).

Billy: Thanks. I did a longer version but decided that I liked the concise one more. Here it is for the hell of it:

His Asshole in Prison

Inflation Reversed
Dimes become

The circumference
of an Eisenhower silver dollar
i enjoyed the couplet on it's own.

what meant was three or four or more couplets saying the exact same thing
in a different way;

The circumference
of an Eisenhower silver dollar

fellow inmates
used it as a slot machine

when it paid out
it paid in shit



just an idea where i think you could take it.





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RE: His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously) - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 08:44 AM
RE: His Asshole in Prison (Language Obviously) - by billy - 12-10-2010, 09:52 AM



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