12-10-2010, 09:52 AM
(12-10-2010, 09:24 AM)Todd Wrote: Thanks Lawrence. I'm going to treat this like Carly Simon (You're So Vain). I would identify the asshole in question until I auction the information off later for a hundred thousand dollars (or Euros if the dollar continues to tank).i enjoyed the couplet on it's own.
Billy: Thanks. I did a longer version but decided that I liked the concise one more. Here it is for the hell of it:
His Asshole in Prison
Inflation Reversed
Dimes become
The circumference
of an Eisenhower silver dollar
what meant was three or four or more couplets saying the exact same thing
in a different way;
The circumference
of an Eisenhower silver dollar
fellow inmates
used it as a slot machine
when it paid out
it paid in shit
just an idea where i think you could take it.
