12-10-2010, 09:08 AM
the poem and the comment are genuinely funny
as a couplet and a short poem i think it and the title excellent.
that said i wish you would have allowed the poem to grow in to a
trio or more of couplets on a similar theme.
thanks for the laugh
as a couplet and a short poem i think it and the title excellent.
that said i wish you would have allowed the poem to grow in to a
trio or more of couplets on a similar theme.
thanks for the laugh